Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people's lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discussed both these views and give your own opinion.

People's opinions differ as to whether
genetic
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modification will lead to a more qualified
life
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potential to diminish the
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life
.
While
it is argued that genetic-related
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might be
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, I still believe that
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modern science
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society. There are a variety of reasons why genetic engineering is considered to be a negative scientific progression for both humans and the earth. They might assert that
this
process is a human interference through which geneticist treat natural products as artificials and alter their inherent structures and we
therefore
could not fully rely on new crops.
Furthermore
, others may see
this
technology as a global conspiracy by which authorities could alter our daily foods and
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in favour of controlling our physical and mental state so that they can reach their dirty political
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. Despite the above arguments, I support the idea that we should be more optimistic about any
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improvements
due to
the advantages it
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causes
.
Firstly
,
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crops
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yields, agricultures have to use pesticides in their fields which
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face them whit
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ranges
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of
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. If alternations on crops genes exert, we will meet
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quality of goods and land without any
distructions
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distractions
destructions
.
Secondly
, genetic engineering in
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laboratories
is
also
used in medicine enhancing both medical treatments for humans and higher capability for pets and domesticated animals and
finally
, a better quality of
life
on the earth. In conclusion, modifications
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genes are playing a pivotal role in human society and
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many assumptions about
this
science,
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believe that it
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brought far more benefits and will lead to
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more
presious
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precious
life
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  • genetic engineering
  • hereditary diseases
  • ethics
  • bioethics
  • unintended consequences
  • socio-economic divide
  • regulations
  • ecosystems
  • enhancements
  • biodiversity
  • food security
  • biotechnology
  • gene editing
  • CRISPR
  • genetically modified organisms (GMOs)
  • eugenics
  • genomic
  • cloning
  • synthetic biology
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