Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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recent times, the only way to see

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of

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or historical artefacts was by visiting public

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and

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. Nowadays,

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can admire them on the internet.

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consider that

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public places

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galleries

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will not

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because of the

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opinion

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places as

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and

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should exist for financial and entertainment reasons.

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is only possible to look at museum objects with the eye of the camera and

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method can not give a full experience of sightseeing. Technological items' quality is not good enough to catch every detail of works of

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. Take my trip to the Louvre

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example, the famous Mona Lisa picture was quite different in real life than it was when I

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saw it online. In the

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gallery,

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was able to see even the texture of paints, which was enabled to admire on the computer.

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of increase in the online museum visitors, the

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pieces

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will become less

impresing

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impressive

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. In conclusion, the only way to fully enjoy historical or artistic artefacts is by seeing them personally. Another reason for

museums

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and

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to exist is to keep the

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pieces

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in good condition. Objects that are quite old need good conservation to keep their beauty.

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, when visitors pay for entry tickets, a great amount of their money is used to clean and preserve paintings. Without regularly dusting and keeping them in the special glass box they will break down.

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without public

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there could be not enough money to keep

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alive. To summarise,

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place

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like

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galleries

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or

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to

exsist

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exist

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. They give

people

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full

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experience of admiring

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and history.

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, seeing these

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personally

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to keep them in the same condition for many years.