Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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recent times, the only way to see

pieces

of

art

or historical artefacts was by visiting public

museums

and

galleries

. Nowadays,

people

can admire them on the internet.

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of

people

consider that

such

public places

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galleries

will not

be need

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because of the

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. I disagree with

this

opionion

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opinion

,

such

places as

galleries

and

museums

should exist for financial and entertainment reasons.

To begin

with, using

Internet

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is only possible to look at museum objects with the eye of the camera and

this

method can not give a full experience of sightseeing. Technological items' quality is not good enough to catch every detail of works of

art

. Take my trip to the Louvre

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example, the famous Mona Lisa picture was quite different in real life than it was when I

had

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saw it online. In the

art

gallery,

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was able to see even the texture of paints, which was enabled to admire on the computer.

As a result

of increase in the online museum visitors, the

art

pieces

will become less

impresing

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impressive

for

people

. In conclusion, the only way to fully enjoy historical or artistic artefacts is by seeing them personally. Another reason for

museums

and

art

galleries

to exist is to keep the

art

pieces

in good condition. Objects that are quite old need good conservation to keep their beauty.

For instance

, when visitors pay for entry tickets, a great amount of their money is used to clean and preserve paintings. Without regularly dusting and keeping them in the special glass box they will break down.

To conclude

without public

museums

there could be not enough money to keep

art

alive. To summarise,

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place

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places

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like

art

galleries

or

museums

will

be needed

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to

exsist

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exist

assist

. They give

people

full

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a full

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experience of admiring

art

and history.

In addition

, seeing these

pieces

personally

are making able

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to keep them in the same condition for many years.