In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the histrory of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

It is true that many
people
in some parts of the world are fond of knowing about buildings' historical background. There are several reasons for
this
interest and
also
a variety of ways to obtain
such
informations
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, which in the following paragraphs will be discussed
People
have many personal and impersonal reasons to search for the history of houses and mansions.
Firstly
, sometimes they just search
it
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for fun and it is a hobby for them in
orther
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order
to satisfy their curiosity.
Secondly
, it is an issue for some
people
to be informed about what types of
people
, or
people
from which walks of life were living in a particular building. Actually, they are
too
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sceptic that they want to know everything with details.
For example
, they want to find out whether any crime happened in
such
place
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or not.
Furthermore
, they want to understand what happened to the
last
inhabitants of a house and is there any extreme mistakes with that home and its previous residents or not.
Finally
,
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they like to know about the
last
refurbishment
to
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if, any
neccessity
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necessity
necessary
repairments like; indoor and outdoor designe
need
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, they take action. There are many ways for a curious individual to search for the background of a mansion. One way is to ask
from
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people
who are
live
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in the
neighborhood
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of that house to find out about the previous residents. The other way is to investigate and check the remaining objects in that house.
Nevertheless
, they can easily understand
about
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the
last
residents' lifestyle, customs and cultures
and
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Also
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the
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secrets that were in their home.
For example
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photo
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they can be informed about the members of that family or their way of clothing. In conclusion, a group of individuals are interested in searching about buildings' history. not only there are many reasons for
this
action, but
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are several means and ways to find out about it.
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