The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides data on the average weekly household expenditure of the citizens in the
year
1968 and 2018.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, it is clear that
the maximum portion of income was spent behind
food in 1968, Change preposition
on
whereas
in the year 2018
it was on leisure activities. Add a comma
2018,
Spendings
on fuel and power Fix the agreement mistake
Spending
are
found Correct subject-verb agreement
is
minimum
in both Replace the word
minimal
the
years.
In terms of food, about 35% of income was spent in 1968, Correct article usage
apply
while
in 2018 the percentage drammatically
went down to around 17%. Correct your spelling
dramatically
Expediture
on fuel and power, clothing and Correct your spelling
Expenditure
footware
and personal goods Correct your spelling
footwear
also
experienced almost a 50% decrease over the period.
On the other hand
, leisure accounted an
increase from 9% to 22% in 2018. Change preposition
for an
Additionaly
, housing Correct your spelling
Additionally
cost
almost doubled from 10% in 1968 to 19% in 2018. Fix the agreement mistake
costs
Moreover
, spending over
transport increased from around 8% to 14% in the year 1969 and 2018, respectively. Noticeably, expenditure Change preposition
on
behind
household goods remained unchanged over the mentioned period of time.Change preposition
on
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