The chart shows the main methods of transportation for people travelling to a university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.

The chart shows the main methods of transportation for people travelling to a university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.
The pie graphs provide information about how categories of transportation travelled to a university for work or study by
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UK residents changed between 2004 and 2009.
Overall
, there was an increase in the percentage of people choosing bus, bicycle, train and walking as their main methods of transport; meanwhile, the share
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experienced a considerable decline.
In addition
, the figures
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picked by
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had the lowest ones throughout the period. At the beginning of the given duration, 33% of the UK citizens opted bus to go to college, followed by a significant growth to 46% and surpassed automobile to become the most popular
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of locomotion in 2009.
Similarly
, the proportion of
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saw a relatively large expansion, which started at 9% in 2004 before reaching 16%
at the end
of the interval examined. Resembling shifts, but to lesser extents, can be seen in the figures for train and walking, which climbed from 3% and 4% in 2004 to 4% and 6% in 2009 respectively.
By contrast
, about half of UK people moved to university by car, making it
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the biggest part in 2004, after which it witnessed a sharp drop to 28% in the final year.
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