some people rely too much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. they think all health problems can just be fixed by visiting doctors. what problems could this approach to healthcare cause and how might they be solved?
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, the government needs to take action. One option is to have a highly restricted smoking zone with red marks, which would be included by police and taken care of by smokers because of the smoking by infectious Linking Words
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