You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: •where you went • what you saw there • how you felt about it.
Hello Peter,
How are you? I’m excited to share my
expereince
with you about a historical museum that I visited yesterday. The museum is located on Correct your spelling
experience
22th
Avenue in our town and opens on weekends.
First of all, the museum has not only a Change the ending
22nd
lost
of antique Correct your spelling
lot
scultpures
in its Correct your spelling
sculptures
sculpture
gallary
display area but Correct your spelling
gallery
also
has a theatre in which one can enjoy watching historical documentries
on a 3D display. You’d be Correct your spelling
documentaries
surpised
to know, it Correct your spelling
surprised
also
has a lighting event for night visitors in which the antique items are glorrified
with special lighting effects.
To be honest, my decision Correct your spelling
glorified
of attending
all these events really made my day! You may be aware of Change preposition
to attend
that
fact that I wasn’t interested in history, but after visiting Correct determiner usage
the
this
place, I now feel more proud about
my cultural roots. I’d Change preposition
of
also
suggest you to
see Remove the particle
apply
this
amazing place and I bet you’ll not get bored for even a minute.
Your friend,
HarpalSubmitted by harpal.singh on
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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,