Instead of requiring primary school students to do experiments themselves, schools should only alllow them to watch experiments demonstrated by teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some educators feel that for
students
to learn effectively they must do experiments themselves, rather than simple
observing their teachers. In my opinion, Change the word
simply
this
sentiment has its limits, but in general
pupils would benefit more from Add a comma
general,
such
a hands-on approach.
Detractors argue that it is more efficient to watch a teacher perform an experiment in front of the class. Throughout the course of the academic year, in classes such
as chemistry, biology and physics, teachers will have to cover dozens of topics and highlight numerous theorems. The teacher may perform experiments in order to illustrate concepts when applicable. If students
conduct these exercises instead
, it would mean less time to go over other areas and would necessitate reducing the size of the curriculum. Their learning may achieve greater depth but the breadth would be abridged.
Nonetheless
, performing an experiment oneself promotes greater understanding. Take for example
a chemistry class. Students
are only likely to remember the end result if the teacher explains the formula for a chemical reaction, selects the ingredients themselves and then
mixes and highlights the process. In contrast
, if the students
must identify, measure and carefully follow steps on their own, they will commit this
information more deeply to memory. Their later analysis will further
reinforce a more complex understanding of the forces at play in a given experiment. Recent pedagogical research supports the contention that the physicality of performing is a powerful aid to memory and the key to long-term retention.
In conclusion, though there are legitimate reasons to not apply this
rule without nuance, it is important that students
generally be given the opportunity to carry out experiments on their own. What students
internalize will be naturally more memorable.Submitted by buttargurpinder73 on
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