You have just moved into a new home and are plannig to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter . introduce yourself . discribe your plans for the party . invite your neibourhour to come
Dear Raj,
Hope you are doing great. My name is Gurpinder Kaur and I moved next to your house with my family
this
week. However
, I am writing this
letter to apologise in advance to you due to
late night first house warming
Correct your spelling
housewarming
as well as
a birthday party of my son next weekend.
To begin
with, firstly
, this
is a small event to celebrate our little achievements in life. Although
we wanted to celebrate outside of the house it was next to impossible because of the low budget. In addition
, we have a small prayer in the evening for the well-being of my family. Also
, the dinner will be served to all the guests after having a dance. Last
but not least, there will be a cake cutting at midnight because this
will be the first birthday of my son.
I would like to invite you and your family to this
small function as this
will not only help us to enjoy the party but also
to know each other. Moreover
, I heard that we have children of the same age. Hence
, this
would be good for both families. Nevertheless
, I would like to feel sorry for any disturbance to you.
I am looking forward to your reply and hope to see you soon.
Yours Lovingly,
Gurpinder KaurSubmitted by buttargurpinder73 on
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task response
Ensure that all the points mentioned in the prompt are addressed in the letter.
coherence cohesion
Make sure there is a clear and logical progression of ideas throughout the letter.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to enhance the overall quality of the writing.
grammatical range
Pay attention to the correct use of grammar and sentence structures.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite