Nowadays, some people are changing their way of look through hair colour, cosmetics and even plastic surgerie. What are the reasons? Is it a good thing?
There has been a noticeable change in
people
changing their own look through hair, and cosmetics . This
essay will point out the reasons behind this
trend, as well as
add critics regarding such
irresponsible behaviour of people
.
To begin
with, it is natural for humans like ourselves to experience such
urges to look good among the public. One couldn't imagine oneself being recognized as what is called a public outcast. Thus
unsurprisingly, thousands of fortunes are spent to help them become a "swan among the pond". However
, that was just the tip of the iceberg as there are lots of people
who underwent deformed birthmarks, in other words
, many people
suffered from abnormal appearances. Hence
surgery is the only option for these types of people
to help them enjoy everyday life without any discrimination. Other than that, captivating beauty surgery to look good is blasphemy and ridiculous.
There have been many reports showing the danger of cosmetics and plastic surgeries, thus
the choice of adding plastic to our bodies just to be beautiful is ignorant behaviour. For example
, there was an event that shocked everyone in Vietnam when a fraud who identified himself as an experienced surgeon, did a surgery which involved inflating a young woman's chest. As a result
, that young woman, who expected to have a successful result after spending millions of Vietnam dong, was
sadly lost her life. Unnecessary verb
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Subsequently
, the fraud was arrested.
To conclude
, it is no surprise for humans to pursue the beauty standard to raise their own public image. However
, concerning health, it would be wise if we just stopped at
dying our hair and doing make-up.Change preposition
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