You had some photos of your family taken by a professional photographer. Write a letter to the photographer. In your letter: Say that you liked their photos of your family Ask them to be your photographer at a special family event Give them the details of the event.

Dear Mr Brown I'm glad to
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my satisfaction with your work; it was fascinating. I'm writing
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letter in order to
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my appreciation and ask you to do another
photography
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for my mother's birthday party which will be thrown up on the 12th of October. I was stressed about the photos before you handed them in because of my frustrated experience with the previous photographer, but I can confess that I was amazed when I got the images; they are glamorous and stunning.
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, The light, gestures and
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in the pictures are really striking. As I mentioned above, it will be my mother's birthday party,
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I wanna ask you to make a new deal for
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celebration; It's so important for us as it is her 50th birthday.
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, I want more attractive photos in diverse locations of the party I know that I can trust you in
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work. The event will be on October 12th, as mentioned above, and it will be on the Green venue which is located on 213 Street. It is going to start at 7 and will continue until midnight. There are about 80 guests and I desire to have pictures from all of them with my mother. I'm keenly looking forward to your response; make sure to ask me if any questions arise. Respectfully, Shaghayegh Shadman
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suitable writing tone
Try to avoid informal expressions such as 'thrown up' and contractions like 'wanna.' Instead, use 'held' and 'want to.'
complete response
Make sure to proofread for minor grammar mistakes, e.g., 'sent my appreciation' should be 'send my appreciation.'
single idea per paragraph
Consider breaking longer paragraphs into shorter ones, especially when introducing new details about the event, to enhance readability.
complete response
You clearly explain your satisfaction with the photographer's previous work, which is engaging and adds a personal touch.
suitable writing tone
The letter has a polite and respectful tone, which is suitable for formal correspondence.
logical structure
Logical structure is generally clear, moving from appreciation to request and then providing details of the event.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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