The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in a country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school by means of different methods of transport.
The chart shows the number of trips children made in a country in 1990 and 2010
traveling
to and from school with specific means of transportation. Change the spelling
travelling
Overall
, it is visible that all the modes of transport have seen a decrease in popularity over time, the only exception being the car for which the opposite is true.
If we consider 1990, the most common way to commute to school was on foot, with over 12 million children doing so. Cycling, walking and taking the bus are positioned similarly
to one another on the graph, all with a value of around 6 millions
Change to singular
million
whereas
the car was by far the least used with only slightly over 4 million students.
On the one hand, by observing the values for the year 2010, the Car increased drastically in popularity, rising to the highest value for this
year of over 11 millions
. Change to singular
million
On the other hand
, all the other transportation methods registered lower numbers with cycling being as low as 2 millions
, a 67% reduction from the over 6 Change to singular
million
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
1990.Change preposition
in
Submitted by mtmongillo on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words millions with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
▼