Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a huge amount of

money

is spent on

space

research every year in

the

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modern

countries

. The common

argue

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argument

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is that the

money

should be spent on developing the standards of living on

earth

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Earth

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.

This

writer strongly agrees with

this

opinion and will show the point of view in

this

essay. First of all, not all

countries

have enough

money

to have a

space

exploration program. Just the big

countries

like America, China or Russia can afford it. The reason behind

this

point of view is that

just

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these

countries

have enough

money

to improve the

space

exploration program.

Moreover

, it

also

spoils our environment.

For instance

, the fume which

coming

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comes

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from the rocket can cause

the

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air pollution and acid

raining

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rain

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. Not only that, it

also

affects people’s health and causes many diseases

such

as lung cancer and respiratory diseases.

Furthermore

, many people in around the world do not have enough food to eat or the lack of living places or the children in the poor areas cannot go to school. The action of spending millions of dollars on

space

explore

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is unnecessary.

Instead

of that, the government should invest

this

money

on

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the business to develop their

countries

, using that

money

to build more

building

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buildings

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for the poor citizens or build more

school

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schools

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to educate the children. In conclusion,

this

writer believes that the big benefits of

explore

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exploring

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the

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space

but it

also

destroys our habitat.

Instead

,

government

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the government

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have to use that

money

to develop the living standards on

earth

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Earth

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.