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A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter Describe what this book was about. Explain how this book influenced you. Say whether this book would be likely to influence other people.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know my opinion about a well-known
book
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 called "Man is from Mars and Woman is from Venus". I am a regular reader of your magazine and I want to contribute
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 an article called "The
book
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 that influenced me most".
Firstly
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, let me explain that textbook in more detail. Basically,
this
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 textbook is about the basic nature of a man and
woman
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a woman
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.
Secondly
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, before reading
this
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book
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 some of my opinions were wrong about these two genders but now, my thoughts and opinions are different.
Because
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 the way "John"(the writer)
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differentiates
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 their response,
behavior
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behaviour
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, nature and way of thinking
that
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apply
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influence
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influences
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 me
most
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the most
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.
This
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 wonderful
book
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 can help people to understand each other and can support couples to live a happy life. Kindly add my opinion about
this
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 textbook in your upcoming article. If you do so I shall be really thankful to you. Your's
faithfully
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, Ayman Zai

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task response
Provide more information about the book, such as the author and its main ideas.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that the paragraphs have clear topic sentences and support the main ideas.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary to enhance your writing.
grammatical range
Pay attention to verb tenses and sentence structures to improve grammatical accuracy.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • influenced
  • contributions
  • readers
  • 'The Alchemist'
  • Paulo Coelho
  • embarks
  • journey
  • personal legend
  • valuable
  • life lessons
  • inspiring
  • pursue
  • themes
  • following one's heart
  • seeking adventure
  • embracing the unknown
  • resonate
  • wide range
  • potential
  • inspire
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