A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter Describe what this book was about. Explain how this book influenced you. Say whether this book would be likely to influence other people.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know my opinion about a well-known

book

called "Man is from Mars and Woman is from Venus". I am a regular reader of your magazine and I want to contribute

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an article called "The

book

that influenced me most".

Firstly

, let me explain that textbook in more detail. Basically,

this

textbook is about the basic nature of a man and

woman

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a woman

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Secondly

, before reading

this

book

some of my opinions were wrong about these two genders but now, my thoughts and opinions are different.

Because

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the way "John"(the writer)

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their response,

behavior

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behaviour

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, nature and way of thinking

that

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influence

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influences

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most

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This

wonderful

book

can help people to understand each other and can support couples to live a happy life. Kindly add my opinion about

this

textbook in your upcoming article. If you do so I shall be really thankful to you. Your's

faithfully

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, Ayman Zai

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task response

Provide more information about the book, such as the author and its main ideas.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that the paragraphs have clear topic sentences and support the main ideas.

lexical resource

Use a wider range of vocabulary to enhance your writing.

grammatical range

Pay attention to verb tenses and sentence structures to improve grammatical accuracy.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

158 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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