The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The chart
represents
Verb problem
shows
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the four kinds of sports
taken
Wrong verb form
that took
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part
by
Change preposition
in
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number
Change the article
a number
the number
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of
people
between 1985 and 2005.
Overall
, the different kinds of sports activities include
,
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apply
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Basketball, Tennis, Badminton and
Rugby
. In 1985, 50
people
choose
Wrong verb form
chose
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badminton and the flow was in the same line till 2005. Basketball was around 55% of
people
and maintained the same flow as same as
the
Correct article usage
apply
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Badminton. Tennis was played by 150
people
in the
year
1985 and was gradually increased to 210
member
Change to a plural noun
members
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by the
year
2005.
Rugby
was ranging from 250
andthere
Correct your spelling
and there
was
drastic
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drastically
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decreased to 50% of the
people
by the time it reached
to
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apply
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2005.
Therefore
,
Rugby
was the maximum amount of
people
Correct pronoun usage
who choose
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choose
Wrong verb form
chose
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to play in the
year
1985 and It was
also
the same sport that was
least
Correct article usage
the least
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taken part
by
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in
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the number of
people
in 2005. Tennis and
Rugby
maintains
Change the verb form
maintain
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the same number that
takes
Wrong verb form
took
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part in playing during the
year
1995 by 200
people
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, rugby, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • participation rate
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • peak
  • stable
  • comparative analysis
  • dominance
  • decline
  • steady growth
  • significant change
  • regional popularity
  • time period
  • sports activities
  • data representation
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