Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should spend on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?
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The writer disagrees with the above view and will explain the reasons in Change preposition
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radiation is higher than normal because of activities in its core, causing more health Change noun form
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or extreme Use synonyms
weathers
on the Earth. Movements of other stars and planets can Fix the agreement mistake
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also
affect our life Linking Words
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as well. Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
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conscious and calculate when and how Unnecessary verb
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can happen, we can prepare long-term solutions to cope with Use synonyms
problems
. In the other way, researching Use synonyms
space
is a necessary action to save our life.
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The another
reason is that we can Remove the article
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natural resources. Correct your spelling
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out space
Although
renewable energies are being used nowadays, we still rely on some materials which are running out Linking Words
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like Change preposition
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steels
and even fossil fuels Fix the agreement mistake
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while
the growing population is requiring more basic needs, so an energy crisis can occur. Investing Linking Words
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exploring spaces can find potential natural resources on other planets and deliver them back Change preposition
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the human-enhanced process.
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humans
spent
more expenditures on Change the verb form
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space
research to make valuable predictions Use synonyms
as well as
finding sources of materials and energies on other planets. Linking Words
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advantage could enhance Linking Words
live
standards and preserve the Earth’s environment in the future.Replace the word
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task response
The essay does not fully address the opposing view and does not present a counter-argument. It is important to acknowledge the opposing view and provide a balanced discussion.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion which provide a good overview of the main points. However, it would be beneficial to mention the opposing view and provide a thesis statement.
lexical resource
The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary and the use of appropriate academic words. However, there are a few instances where sentences could be more concise and precise.
grammatical range
Overall, the essay shows good control of grammar with few errors. However, there are some instances where sentence structures could be more varied to enhance the writing.
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