There have been a few cases of child abuse at some childcare centres in Vietnam. Discuss the reasons for this and the effects it can have on the affected children.
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could be seen at some kindergartens in Vietnam that child Correct pronoun usage
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abuse
happened at an unfrequented range. People hold a
different Correct article usage
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viewpoint
about Fix the agreement mistake
viewpoints
this
phenomenon for why it happened and what are
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the
effects it can have on Correct article usage
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children
who went
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essay, I will discuss the reasons for this
and the consequences it brings. There are various reasons that caused the teachers who in
charge of Add a missing verb
are in
children
to decide to use violence both physically and mentally on them.
Firstly
, it is worth noticing that Vietnam is an Asian country where people believe that reprimand and physical punishment is important to educate children
at a young age to make them behave properly. For example
, some kids are forever crying and would not stop until someone severely reprimand
them or Change the verb form
reprimands
hit
them. From that observation, they made an assumption that physical and emotional violation is the fastest way to make them well–behaved. But that could lead to something immoral, if the Correct subject-verb agreement
hits
children
are accustomed to that kind of violence , the educators got
to use excessive force and Verb problem
have
that is
what we call abuse
. Secondly
, Vietnam is
still Unnecessary verb
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lack
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lacks
of
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children
rights organizations, Change noun form
children's
therefore
at
a whole, Change preposition
as
children
are still suffering from violation as there í lack
of supervision and protection from governmental organizations.
The consequences of Correct article usage
a lack
this
kind of child abuse
on children
who went through it may vary. In the most severe cases, usually
the torture claimed their lives. Add a comma
usually,
Besides
, emotional trauma is worth noticing as that could affect the reflection of the world as they grow up. Distorted perspective as a result
of childhood trauma is widely accepted as real . One historical figure that
is considered as Correct pronoun usage
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suffering
from Wrong verb form
suffered
this
consequence was Adolf Hitler , in his school day he was abused by his teachers and surrounding people that
made him become one of the greatest dictators and harm many others.
In conclusion , reasons for child Correct pronoun usage
which
abuse
could be from the national factor and believing
to lack of organizations to supervise the action of teacher , and the repercussion is immeasurable from killing them to causing Verb problem
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suffer
to othersChange the form of the verb
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