The table below shows the weight of people in a particular country from 1999 to 2009.
The table compares the level of
weight
of a society by gender in a specific country between 1999 and 2009. Use synonyms
Overall
, approximately half of the Linking Words
men
and Use synonyms
women
in the country had normal Use synonyms
weight
during a 10-year period, Use synonyms
while
others were either Linking Words
underweight
or overweight.
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To begin
, the proportion of normal-Linking Words
weight
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females
was just under half in the late 1990s, followed by a slight incline to just above one in two in 2004, Use synonyms
then
dropped to 47% through 5 years later. Linking Words
In contrast
, Linking Words
men
had a smaller fraction of normal Use synonyms
weight
at 41% in 1999, which later showed a rapid climb to 48% as of 2004. In 2009, overweight males had a tiny decrease equal to the normal Use synonyms
weight
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women
.
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On the other hand
, 27% of Linking Words
females
and 22% of males were Use synonyms
underweight
in 1999. Five years forward, the Use synonyms
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underweight
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number of underweight
women
increased to 29% and the other cohort declined to two out of five. In the late 2000s, the percentage of Use synonyms
underweight
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women
and Use synonyms
men
were at 28% and 23% respectively. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
females
who were overweight in 1999 had less portion than overweight Use synonyms
men
at 18% and 30%. Use synonyms
However
, the overweight Linking Words
women
minimally rose to 21% and the other dramatically fell to 23% by 2004. In 2009, both Use synonyms
females
and males had an equal number of overweight by 19%.Use synonyms
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