The three pie chart represents information on cost randomly divided the local government in the same countries into a several sections.

The three pie chart represents information on cost randomly divided the local government in the same countries into a several sections.
The three pie chart represents information on cost randomly divided
the
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local government in the same countries into
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several sections.
Overall
over the twenty the amount of money allocated for the necessary environmental services increased from the lowest a tiny fraction to
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.At the same time, if every ten years
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on higher education the minimum indicator was the
percentage
of funds allocated to others.
According to
1990 the
percentage
of human health, including
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training
and others with transformation just over
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half and the other two reached 50%.The cost of human health and
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K education
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equal in the same year. In the year when the smallest
percentage
of power losses allocated to environmental services amounted
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tiny
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the transformation was 16%, and
then
industries rose to five
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in two
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.In 2000 local authorities increased funds for important industries
percentage
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proportion.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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