The government should be responsible for providing retirees with financial support and care. While many people think that citizens should save money to take care of themselves when they are old. Discuss both views and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Issues related to financial support for elderly

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are frequently discussed these days.

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some believe that, the

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should be responsible for providing retirees with financial support and

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, others criticize

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and argue that citizens should save money to take

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of themselves when they are old. In the following paragraph, both sides of

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statement will be discussed. On the one hand, there are various reasons why the finances of retirees should be supported by their

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. The principal reason is that many retired

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do not have a proper financial plan or strategy after their retirement.

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problem can lead to the rising number of

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in almshouses.

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, If they work for a private corporation that does not provide enough pension, they tend to lack financial more than

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who work in the

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service. To exemplify, My parents working under the Ministry of Interior receive monthly old-age pensions to cover their expenses so they can take

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of themselves with

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income.

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, some opponents may argue that everybody should prepare themselves for life after retirement. The main reason for

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view is that we should spend our taxation on other appropriate considerations

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as infrastructure or education.

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, More than 15

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of our taxes are allocated to the quality of life among the elderly

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of focusing on other factors to develop the country. All things considered, I am of the opinion that the

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should take responsibility for taking

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of senior citizens.

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, all of us should realize

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problem and formulate our own fundamental financial plan for retirement.