People who live in large cities face a range of problem in their daily life. What are the most significant of these problem? How can these problem be tackled?

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in their daily
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This
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in cities is increased on a daily basis and
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the law more strictly as the most viable solution. In
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urban
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to numerous
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human life in danger. Because of
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poverty, human is showing their truth mask, homeless people become
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delinquents
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in the metropolis, the envy inside each people was increased over
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time,
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savage owned their
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. What will happen if half of the city will not obey the laws?
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, 40 teenagers are being arrested because of killing. Their awareness was too young to realize what were they doing
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A possible remedy for
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the children and
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all the rules. What
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happening now will
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directly to the future. Plenty of people who are being arrested are being irresponsible for what they are doing. Imposed the law more strictly
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let them know being a criminal is the wrong way. Consider
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Singapore, Just by littering, you will be sentenced
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3 years in
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prison or earning
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corporal punishment,
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on the
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of the
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. In conclusion,
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the
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will solve every problem for residents in urban areas. It will avoid almost criminal activities
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your life
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • metropolis
  • commute
  • public transportation
  • gridlock
  • air pollution
  • noise pollution
  • expensive housing
  • exorbitant prices
  • work-life balance
  • recreation areas
  • parks and gardens
  • criminal activities
  • security measures
  • density
  • neighborhood
  • public amenities
  • healthcare facilities
  • educational institutions
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