Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree
As a major means of information delivery, television has become a powerful tool in modern
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As a result
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on it, be it at home or school. From my perspective, I am not in favour of the opinion, believing that it could be a poor substitute for schooling and home Use synonyms
education
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On the one hand, there is no doubt that Use synonyms
TV
is able to improve the efficiency of learning. It can not only shorten the distance of teaching by creating a visual educational environment for schoolchildren that breaks barriers of Use synonyms
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make lessons more attractive and impressive. Linking Words
For example
, history teaching is usually boring with full of monotonous text words, which, Linking Words
by contrast
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TV
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thus
leaving a remarkable impression and memorizing contents more easily.
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On the other hand
, too much exposure to the screen exerts a negative impact on their both mental and physical health. For one thing, children are more likely to suffer from myopia, obesity and other kinds of diseases triggered by the sedentary lifestyle and the indulgence in watching Linking Words
TV
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That is
because they are addicted to screens Linking Words
instead
of playing outside or attending sports activities. For another, excessive screen Linking Words
time
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