What are the advantages and disadvantages for children of television?

In recent years there has been a considerable trend to divert kids’ attention by giving them permission to watch

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. It is affected by parents being frivolous about parenting. One of the positives of

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platforms for

children

is that they can give knowledge that can affect

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television

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children

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beneficial to

children

are accessibility to valuable knowledge and gaining concentration.

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and use that as a good method for their kids to learn foreign languages by watching

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shows.

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indicators show that

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more receptive to

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information quickly.

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century,more and more technologies

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coming out,so it’s not

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usage of

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access to

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early age can formulate issues with

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the advantages of

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can be valuable knowledge and concentration skills,

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it may have negative effects like bad vision and negatively influencing one's mindset.I believe these positives outweigh

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negatives .