People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily lives. What are the most significant of these problems? How can these problems be tackled?

nowadays, citizens who live in urban areas are faced in their daily

life

a sense of

problems

. the significant of these

problems

are

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the cost of living and crimes around their accommodation, and

then

they develop equipment for security. the proposal caused

this

problems

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is the cost of living nowadays is higher than in the past. citizens need to pay an electric bill or water bill once a month.

consequently

, it

make

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people feel pressure

in

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work and they do not want to buy anything because the bill is too high

foe

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them to buy. a primary example of

this

problem is that in India, in some poor areas, people work day by day but their

life

are

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not better and

then

they can not buy anything for themselves or their

childs beacause

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children because

all of their money are

use

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to buy food. another reason

of

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this

problem is the criminal surrounding our accommodations. large cities are places have the rates of crime are much higher than in the countryside because in urban areas, there not only

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developing industries but

also

have a lot of healthy houses. in Ho Chi Minh City, if the house is not

in

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the main road, it will be

easily

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for

criminal

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criminals

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to commit

crime

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crimes

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. developing security equipment is a good solution to

this

problem.

singapore

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is a typical example, where have a lot of

camera

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around the street so it is easy to catch

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criminal when they commit crimes and will give minutes of sanctions to their house.

To sum up

,

although

it is clear that

cities face a range of

problems

, it is undoubtedly possible to start to tackle these issues

,

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and improve the quality of

life

in cities. Governments and local councils must take the lead in dealing with these

problems

,

otherwise

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otherwise,

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city

life

will only get worse in the future.