You want to rent out a small apartment to a family, and you have decided to advertise it. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper asking to advertise your ad on the front page of the newspaper. In your letter, •give details of the ad that you want to publish •mention that you want the ad to be published on the front page •say how you would like to pay for the advertisement

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to request you to publish an ad regarding renting a small
apartment
to a family. I want to publish it on the front page of your paper so that it will be visible to everyone. I want to publish adequate information about my
apartment
. Like,
this
apartment
is in a calm and peaceful area. It has three rooms, two bathrooms, and a fully furnished kitchen.
Also
, it has a separate room for laundry. Recently, I installed
dishwasher
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in the kitchen for the convenience of the family members. I want to rent
this
apartment
as soon as possible because I am moving from
this
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one
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city to another for business purposes. I want to publish my ad on the first page of your newspaper which will be more accessible for the tenants. I will use an
interac
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E-transfer to pay you for publishing my ad in the newspaper. I think it is the best method for sending money to another within a few minutes. I will be very grateful to you! Yours faithfully, Sam.
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task achievement
Consider providing more specific details or unique features of the apartment to make the advertisement more appealing.
coherence cohesion
Enhance paragraph division by starting a new paragraph for payment details.
suitable writing tone
The letter has a clear and appropriate formal tone throughout.
complete response
The letter successfully includes all the necessary details required for the task, such as apartment specifics and payment method.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • apartment
  • rent out
  • advertisement
  • front page
  • details
  • monthly rent
  • number of rooms
  • amenities
  • location
  • contact information
  • urgency
  • reasonable rates
  • tenant
  • editor
  • local newspaper
  • publish
  • payment method
  • exposure
  • prime location
  • family-friendly
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