this graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country

this graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country
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The given line graph illustrates the percentage of recycled materials namely
paper
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and
cardboard
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, glass containers, Aluminium cans and plastic from 1982 to 2010
Overall
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, the figures for glass containers and
aluminum
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aluminium
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are recycled materials, which had an upward trend
while
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plastics and
paper
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and
cardboard
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fluctuated insignificantly.
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,
paper
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and
cardboard
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still were the most recycled material. In 1982, the proportion of reused glass containers was 50%, after 8 years it decreased slightly by 10%. From 1990 to 2010
this
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number grew gradually to 60% .
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,
aluminum
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aluminium
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cans started to be recycled
in
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around the 1980s with nearly 5%,
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this
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figure rose sharply to approximately 45% in 2010. Turning to
paper
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and
cardboard
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, the proportion of reused material was about 65%. There was a minimal fluctuation in
this
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number from 1982 to 1990,
while
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plastics began to be reused with 5%, which was similar to Aluminum cans. In the rest of
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period, when the proportion of
paper
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and
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, cardboard with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • percentage
  • paper and cardboard
  • glass
  • plastic
  • metal
  • stable
  • noticeable
  • rise
  • significant increase
  • accounting for
  • consistent
  • ste steadily
  • dramatically
  • nearly
  • worth noting
  • relatively low
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