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Some experts believe that it is better for children to learn foreign language at primary school not in secondary school. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage

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Languages, like genes, are
also
 documents of history. In
this
 period of globalization, some people think that it is important to learn
foreign
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language
at
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initial
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the initial
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 period of
school
 rather than in secondary
school
. I strongly agree with
this
 statement.
One
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 the one hand,
language
 is the base of any culture. Learning a foreign
language
 has many benefits.
Firstly
, it helps teenagers to know the foreign culture in which the
language
 is spoken by local people.
Moreover
, students have less academic
pressure
 so they can easily learn the other
language
 at
such
age
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. By learning a new
language
 at primary
school
, teenagers can choose to be in that
language
 medium and it will be easy for them as they already know it.
Furthermore
, it will help them to attend meetings and interviews with international companies and help to get respectable
job
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of
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 their field.
Lastly
, during
traveling
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 the risk of
language
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 barrier is minimized if one
know
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 the
language
 properly and
help
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helps
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 to interact easily with foreigners.
On the other hand
, secondary
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school
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school's
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 students tend to learn other
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languages
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language
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languages
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 easily than
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in primary
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primary
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in primary
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school
,
however
, they have huge
pressure
 of academics and career so it is a difficult choice for children
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that
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wheather
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whether
 learning
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a new
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new
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language
 is
more
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apply
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better or their career and studies are more crucial.
Furthermore
, secondary
school's
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child
 is usually more into playing games with their friends so it is hard for parents to reconcile their
child
 to learn
new
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a new
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language
. To reciprocate, learning
foreign
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a foreign
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language
 has many benefits.
However
,
mental
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pressure
 of
child
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a child
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 is
also
 important
otherwise
 it will have
negative
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 impact on
child
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the child
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. So every parent should opt
their
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 children
for learning
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to learn
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new
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a new
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language
 in primary
school
is
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in
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best
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the best
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 possible way as they do not have that much mental
pressure
.
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