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The diagram below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years. The evolution of the horse, with particular emphasis on the changing foot structure. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The diagram below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years. The evolution of the horse, with particular emphasis on the changing foot structure. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The diagram illustrates the evolution of the horse from 40 million
years
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 ago to
this
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era
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 which emphasizes the improvement of their
foot
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 structure.
Overall
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,
although
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horses
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 become bigger and taller over the period,
horses
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 in the modern
era
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 have fewer
fingers
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 than the older ones. Eohippus, the name of
horses
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 40 million
years
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 ago, was the smallest type of horse compared with the other eras.
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, their
foot
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 has five
fingers
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while
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 the other
horses
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 in different eras have less than that. Ten
years
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 later, Eohippus turned into Mesohippus, a bigger horse with three-
foot
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fingers
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.
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 their
foot
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fingers
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 became less than in the beginning period, they became sturdier.
Furthermore
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, fifteen million
years
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 after, Mesohippus became Merychippus. Merychippus has longer feet and
fingers
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 than the one in the previous
era
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 so it
also
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 looks taller. In the modern
era
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, we found
Horses
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 which developed to be really tall animals with strong feet.
Nevertheless
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,
horses
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 nowadays do not have
foot
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fingers
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, era, foot, horses, fingers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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