The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram
illustrate
the stages of how carbonate drinks Change the verb form
illustrates
is
made. Change the verb form
are
Overall
, there are five stages starting from water
cleaning until package
to delivered to supermakets.
Correct article usage
the package
According to
the picture, the process begin
with filtering raw Change the verb form
begins
water
to make it clear then
delivered
Wrong verb form
delivers
Correct pronoun usage
it into
into
the Change preposition
to
water
softener tank. Chemicals also
used in that media to make the Add a missing verb
are also
water
soften and then
sent through the pump to electric heaters. This
second stage, electric heaters make the Change preposition
In this
water
heat and evaporate whereas
delivered with cooling
pipe into separate media experiencing Add an article
a cooling
carbonation
process.
Correct article usage
a carbonation
Furthermore
, after mixed
with carbon dioxide the main material Wrong verb form
mixing
run
through a pipe which directly Wrong verb form
runs
connect
Change the verb form
connects
with
Change preposition
to
mixing
tank, which is in Correct article usage
the mixing
this
stage divided by
3 main Change preposition
into
task
Change to a plural noun
tasks
such
as colouring, create
Wrong verb form
creating
syruo
and Correct your spelling
syrup
add
flavour. Afterwards, it passed another filter to Wrong verb form
adding
filtering
and Replace the word
filter
filling
the bottles and cans. After Wrong verb form
fill
all
bottles Add a comma
all,
filled
, the Add a missing verb
are filled
last
proces
is Correct your spelling
process
Add an article
a package
the package
package
to sell in Wrong verb form
packaged
supermakets
.Correct your spelling
supermarkets
Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼