The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram

illustrate

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illustrates

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the stages of how carbonate drinks

is

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are

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made.

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, there are five stages starting from

water

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cleaning until

package

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the package

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to delivered to supermakets.

According to

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the picture, the process

begin

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begins

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with filtering raw

water

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to make it clear

then

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delivered

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delivers

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it into

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into

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to

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the

water

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softener tank. Chemicals

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also

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are also

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used in that media to make the

water

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soften and

then

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sent through the pump to electric heaters.

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This

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second stage, electric heaters make the

water

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heat and evaporate

whereas

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delivered with

cooling

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a cooling

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pipe into separate media experiencing

carbonation

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a carbonation

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process.

Furthermore

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, after

mixed

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mixing

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with carbon dioxide the main material

run

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runs

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through a pipe which directly

connect

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connects

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with

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to

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mixing

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the mixing

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tank, which is in

this

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stage divided

by

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into

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3 main

task

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tasks

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such

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as colouring,

create

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creating

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syruo

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syrup

and

add

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adding

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flavour. Afterwards, it passed another filter to

filtering

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filter

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and

filling

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fill

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the bottles and cans. After

all

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all,

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bottles

filled

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are filled

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, the

last

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proces

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process

is

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a package

the package

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package

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packaged

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to sell in

supermakets

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supermarkets

.