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Many criminals commit further crime as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

#criminals #crime #prison
There is an assortment of evidence indicating that
indiviudals
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individuals
 with a history of
crime
 activity may continue to engage in similar
behavior
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 after their release from jail. I wholeheartedly agree with
this
 statement, since it is a recurring occurrence and in order to mitigate its impact
mental
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on mental
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 health, it may take several decades of stable control by public services. It is widely recognized that
majority
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the majority
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ex-
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of ex-crime
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crime
 members maintain connections with mafia bosses and other organized
crime
. They often involve these connections new objectives and deals.
Therefore
, it is obvious that cutting off
cummunication
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communication
 can be quite tricky. To delve deeper, let's explore some examples.
According to
the
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some news articles, if
released
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a released
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 gang member
will resign
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resigns
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 from
present
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their present
his present
her present
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crime
 status and other
crime
responsabilities
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responsibilities
,
the
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apply
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threats and menaces may naturally emerge.
According to
 the solutions,
government
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the government
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 can
adress
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address
 these factors above by enacting
approporate
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appropriate
 new laws and rules.
Also
, numerous social activities should be provided for former members of the criminal community.
This
 will help ensure their schedules are filled with activities that benefit both society and the environment, and it is important to ensure proper distribution of payrolls.
For instance
, many crimes are committed because of personal financial problems,
consequently
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 it might be obsoleted by providing tiny and steady social works for ex-
crime
group
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groups
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 of people.
To conclude
, authorities and public services must attract
ex-criminal
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ex-criminals
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on
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to
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 social activities in order to stay away from
murdery
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murder
, robbery and other types of
crime
. Prioritizing the mental health and financial state of every
individuals
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individual
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 is paramount.
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