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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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 a number of improvements have been made in the agricultural field, a multitude around the globe is still starving. There is a plethora of reasons governing
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 issue and predominant ones will be discussed in the upcoming passages with a viable solution for the problem.
Firstly
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, it is obvious that success of the crop cultivation is in the hands of farmers.
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 enhancements to
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 field are brought in many ways, as they are not incorporated into agronomy, the ongoing detrimental issue of increased malnourished families still exists. In order to do
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, the cultivators should be provided with adequate technical know-how, sufficient subsidies and various other financial facilities.
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 the corruption prevalent in most of the bureaucratic states, the distribution of incentives for farmers becomes uneven.
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, in Sri Lanka,
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 having all the technical expertise to shift into carbonic cultivations, still crop cultivators continue with their conventional methods
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 a lack of support from the state authorities. As a remedial action for
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, it is the responsibility of the national administration to tighten the legislation related to the agricultural sector.
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, the
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 can encourage the farming community by providing technical, financial and moral support,
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 paving the way for them to adhere to new methodologies and modifications in the industry. The use of sophisticated mechanisms could inevitably eradicate the undernourishment of people in society. In conclusion, the developments in the agricultural sector are less accompanied by the farming population
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 a lack of possibilities and infrastructure which could be supplied by the government in order to fulfil the hunger of people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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