The graph below shows the percentage of households with diferent kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information bselecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words
The line graph illustrates data regarding the percentage of household technology in the U.S from 1995 to 1999. Generally speaking, the
overall
trend of portion has dramatically increased in the considered period albeit with some specific trends of some devices.
First off, in 1995 washing machines were the most prevalent household device in America, and it was constantly increasing till 1999, which was 60% to 70 percent. However
, from 1996 to 1997, its increasing trend was close to zero. It is noticeable that the washing machine was the most popular device from 1995 to 1999 in the U.S. Meanwhile the computer was the second most popular in American households which also
kept increasing. But it is interesting to find that the phone took its place after half of 1998, the household owned phone number was skyrocketing after 1996 from 20% to 75%, before that year, its increasing rate was gentle which was 19% to 20%. Householed-owned DVD players number had a pretty steep picture, it declined from 25% to 15% from 1995 to 1996, and after 1996, it surged from 15% to 40%. Internet owner portion faced a moderate increase from 1995 to 1999, and it shared the same trend with DVD player owners which was 20% to 30%.Submitted by cyh000823 on
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