The graph below gives information about U.S. government spending on research between 1980 and 2008.
The line graph illustrates how much money was allocated for 4 different majors by the US government from 1980 to 2008.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the expenditure on health was the highest while
the reverse was true for general science, while
all majors witnessed a fluctuation over the period
.
In detail, starting at 8 billion
in 1980 the figure for Heath surged to reach a peak at 22 billion
in 2004, before falling to under 19 billion
in 2008. While
the expenditure of the US government for Space increased slightly from over 5 billion
to under 10 billion
between 2980 and 2008, a similar trend was seen in the figure for general science that went up gradually by 2.5 billion
to reach 5 billion
at the end
of the period
.
There was a period
of stability experienced in the amount of money allocated for energy between 1980 and 1992 then
this
figure fluctuated around 5 billion
and 7 billion
. In addition
, the US government spent their
budget on the other was drop over the Correct pronoun usage
apply
period
which started at 7.5 billion
and at the end
of the
Correct article usage
apply
period
was
5 Unnecessary verb
apply
billion
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