Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree?

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Undoubtedly governments of
developed
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developing
nations should share the responsibility of helping less fortunate nations. Different measures exist, ranging from market access to direct financial payments or even medical
assistance
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essay will explain why certain measures are inherently better than other methods.
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, the most adequate manner to assist the lesser developed countries is not through health or education ‘
hand-outs
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method is flawed and only offers temporary relief from long-term challenges;
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this
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assistance
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can be cut at any moment, leaving the country stranded.
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, economical help from the UK to disadvantaged regions in Africa has gradually been reduced since the onset of the financial crisis.
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some parts of the continent may be better educated or in better health, the benefit was short lived,
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leaving the countries of Africa to look for other donors. Commerce is without doubt the most essential type of
assistance
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that can be given. If the lesser developed country has the opportunity to develop trade,
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it will build strong capabilities to serve it for the long term. These strengths can develop the local economy and are more reliable than education or health.
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, while trading with
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the richest
country the government can search for other foreign markets to trade with.
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would offer more stability and diversification for the nation. To conclude,
assistance
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is definitely necessary for the poorer regions;
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, ‘hand-outs’ are short-term solutions. The optimum solution is to offer market access so the region can produce products and generate regular income.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • underdeveloped nations
  • economic disparity
  • global cooperation
  • moral obligation
  • historical exploitation
  • interconnected world
  • economic stability
  • quality of life
  • trade relationships
  • humanitarian aid
  • capacity building
  • dependency syndrome
  • sustainable development
  • bilateral agreements
  • economic priorities
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