39.The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

39.The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph displays the fluctuation of house prices in five cities, and a comparison between the years from 1990 to 1995 and 1996 to 2002 with the average price in 1989.
Overall
, London had the largest
variation
in both periods compared with 1989. The other significant feature of
this
graph is that
Frankfurt
varied the least between 1996 and 2002. London and Tokyo had the same proportion of changes from 1990 to 1995, which was around -7,5%, followed by New
York
with 2,5% less, which was -5%.
While
Madrid and
Frankfurt
, had positive changes,
Frankfurt
had a percentage of approximately 2.5%,
while
Madrid had the smallest
variation
in
this
period of time compared to the other cities, which was nearly 2%. From 1996 to 2002, London continued to have the largest
variation
, with around 12%. New
York
and Tokyo had the same
variation
amount, but New
York
had a positive fluctuation,
while
Tokyo’s was negative, which were -5% and 5% respectively. Madrid just had 1% less than New
York
, which was 4%, and
finally
,
Frankfurt
had the smallest
variation
with just 1%.
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