39.The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph displays the fluctuation of house prices in five cities, and a comparison between the years from 1990 to 1995 and 1996 to 2002 with the average price in 1989.
Overall
, London had the largest Linking Words
variation
in both periods compared with 1989. The other significant feature of Use synonyms
this
graph is that Linking Words
Frankfurt
varied the least between 1996 and 2002.
London and Tokyo had the same proportion of changes from 1990 to 1995, which was around -7,5%, followed by New Use synonyms
York
with 2,5% less, which was -5%. Use synonyms
While
Madrid and Linking Words
Frankfurt
, had positive changes, Use synonyms
Frankfurt
had a percentage of approximately 2.5%, Use synonyms
while
Madrid had the smallest Linking Words
variation
in Use synonyms
this
period of time compared to the other cities, which was nearly 2%.
From 1996 to 2002, London continued to have the largest Linking Words
variation
, with around 12%. New Use synonyms
York
and Tokyo had the same Use synonyms
variation
amount, but New Use synonyms
York
had a positive fluctuation, Use synonyms
while
Tokyo’s was negative, which were -5% and 5% respectively. Madrid just had 1% less than New Linking Words
York
, which was 4%, and Use synonyms
finally
, Linking Words
Frankfurt
had the smallest Use synonyms
variation
with just 1%.Use synonyms
Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words variation, frankfurt, york with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
▼