The map below shows changes to a park in 1980 and now
The map shown shows the changes that have occurred in the
park
since 1980 until now. It is also
clear that the park
has become suitable for all age groups and some new places have been added.
In the 1980 map, from the left, there is a pond, benches, and flowers. They remained as they were, and the flowers were replaced by a bush area. In addition
, two gates were opened, so the roads leading to the park
became larger than they were in 1980, and because of this
, the park
became frequented by many pedestrians.
On the map to the right of the picture, in 1980 there were only trees at the top, but now many facilities have been added, such
as chairs, desks, and barbecue areas. In the lower part of the barbecue area, the flowers were removed and a playground was built in their place. We note that the owner of the garden modified it to suit everyone.Submitted by Ethar Ali
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