A museum near your home is looking for people to do a part-time voluntary unpaid job. You would like to do some voluntary unpaid work at the museum. write a letter to the museum Director to apply for the voluntary unpaid work. in your letter explain why you want to do voluntary unpaid work at the museum describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Sir/Madam, I am Vikram Kallem
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Western University. I am writing
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letter in response to the vacant Voluntary position at the Museum. As I am in the final year of my Bachelors degree,I am desperately looking for
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voluntary positions where I can add that experience to my resume.
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future. Since
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I am
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and Art student I gained
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our culture and arts .
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overview
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our history to the
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.
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fluency is appreciable.
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and good at organising things. In regards
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my schedule ,I am
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weekdays and full day on weekends. Please consider my request and get back to me when you have time. Looking forward to your reply,
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sincerely, Vikram kallem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Voluntary unpaid work
  • Museum Director
  • Intention
  • Contribute
  • Community
  • Art
  • History
  • Skills
  • Qualities
  • Communication
  • Organization
  • Attention to detail
  • Passion
  • Learning
  • Teamwork
  • Availability
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