Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do help reduce the amount of rubbish produces?
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task response
Make sure to address all parts of the question in your response. In this essay, you have discussed the reasons for the increasing amount of rubbish and suggested government actions to reduce it, but you could have provided a more comprehensive analysis of the issue.
coherence cohesion
Overall, your essay has a logical structure with a clear introduction and conclusion. However, pay attention to the organization of your paragraphs to ensure a smoother flow of ideas.
lexical resource
Your use of vocabulary is generally appropriate. However, try to incorporate more varied and precise vocabulary to enhance your essay. Additionally, be mindful of sentence structures to make your writing more engaging.
grammatical range
Your grammar is mostly accurate, although there are a few errors in sentence structure and verb agreement. Proofread your essay carefully to eliminate these mistakes and ensure a higher level of grammatical accuracy.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.