The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information.

The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information.
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The table above illustrates the earnings and the money spent on gas in the top ten world's most expensive petrol.
Overall
, Among the ten countries, the monthly disposable salary from
norway
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Norway
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is the highest
while
their spending is the lowest on fuel.
On the other hand
,
Eritrea
people have the lowest monthly salary but the highest
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spending on fuel. Norway is a country with its citizens having a $4329 monthly disposable salary which is the highest and only 7.40% of that
income
goes to fuel.
While
Norway people have high pay but spend the least on gas,
Eritrea
is the opposite, with only $450.09 monthly wages but
Eritrea
people need an estimated 275 dollars on gas.
This
means more than half of their wages are going straight to petrol. Unlike
Eritrea
, Sweden whose monthly expenses on gasoline are
also
$275, their disposable
income
per month is 3548.81, the second highest
income
among the ten countries. Turkey is
also
a country with the second lowest
income
and is estimated at around $924,64 per month.
Moreover
, their budget for gasoline is over
one third
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of their
income
, 34,20%.
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  • petrol
  • expensive
  • countries
  • financial information
  • average
  • prices
  • GDP per capita
  • income
  • data
  • currency
  • fluctuate
  • factors
  • impact
  • cost of living
  • transportation
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