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48.The charts below show the number of international students in Canada and USA in 2002 and 2003, also the changes of the increase in student population over the two years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

48.The charts below show the number of international students in Canada and USA in 2002 and 2003, also the changes of the increase in student population over the two years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The tables display information about the number of
students
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 around the world that study in
Canada
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 and the United
States
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 and the proportion in which it increased during 2002 and 2003.
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, in
Canada
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 and the United
States
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, the number of international
students
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 increased from 2002 to 2003,
while
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 the U.S. has more Indian
students
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,
Canada
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 has more Chinese
students
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. In
Canada
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, Chinese people had the highest proportion of international
students
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, with 3100 individuals in 2002,
this
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 grew by 27% in the next year, to 3956. Followed by
students
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 from the United
States
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, who started the period with 2243 people, but in 2003 it fell by 6% to 2101,
while
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 Indian
students
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 had the largest increase in the number of people, which is a rise of 50%, from 1635 to 2460 in 2002 and 2003 respectively. In the United
States
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, Indian
students
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 are almost half of the total international
students
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, in 2002 there were a total of 23525 international
students
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 and 11023 were Indians,
while
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 in 2003 there were a total of 26989, 14230 were Indians.
Students
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 from
Canada
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 decreased from 6852 in 2002 to 5214 in 2003.
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, Chinese individuals rose by one-
third,
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from 5650 to 7545.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, canada, states with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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