48.The charts below show the number of international students in Canada and USA in 2002 and 2003, also the changes of the increase in student population over the two years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The tables display information about the number of
students
around the world that study in Canada
and the United States
and the proportion in which it increased during 2002 and 2003.
Overall
, in Canada
and the United States
, the number of international students
increased from 2002 to 2003, while
the U.S. has more Indian students
, Canada
has more Chinese students
.
In Canada
, Chinese people had the highest proportion of international students
, with 3100 individuals in 2002, this
grew by 27% in the next year, to 3956. Followed by students
from the United States
, who started the period with 2243 people, but in 2003 it fell by 6% to 2101, while
Indian students
had the largest increase in the number of people, which is a rise of 50%, from 1635 to 2460 in 2002 and 2003 respectively.
In the United States
, Indian students
are almost half of the total international students
, in 2002 there were a total of 23525 international students
and 11023 were Indians, while
in 2003 there were a total of 26989, 14230 were Indians. Students
from Canada
decreased from 6852 in 2002 to 5214 in 2003. Finally
, Chinese individuals rose by one-third,
from 5650 to 7545.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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