52.The diagram below shows the way in which sand dunes are formed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

52.The diagram below shows the way in which sand dunes are formed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The graphic illustrates how
sand
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dunes are created.
Overall
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, it is a mainly 3 stage, natural process. It important things in the process are
wind
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,
sand
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particles
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, wet
sand
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and dry
ground
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. First of all, the
sand
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particles
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are blown by the
wind
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over the dry sandy
ground
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and two areas of wet
sand
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.
This
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is
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followed by the second diagram in which it can be seen that as
particles
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of
sand
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continue to be carried by the
wind
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along the
ground
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, some
particles
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start to adhere to the first and the second wet
ground
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in separate piles. The
sand
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particles
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which have been transported by the
wind
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, as illustrated in the final diagram, eventually gather en masse over the area of wet
sand
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, piling one on top of the other until they form a
sand
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dune. The accumulation of so many
sand
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particles
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is so large that the dunes, once formed, can deflect the
wind
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, forcing it up one side of the dune and down the other. As
this
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happens,
particles
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of
sand
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start gathering and piling up in the next area of wet
ground
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sand, wind, particles, ground with synonyms.
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