52.The diagram below shows the way in which sand dunes are formed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

52.The diagram below shows the way in which sand dunes are formed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graphic illustrates how
sand
dunes are created.
Overall
, it is a mainly 3 stage, natural process. It important things in the process are
wind
,
sand
particles
, wet
sand
and dry
ground
. First of all, the
sand
particles
are blown by the
wind
over the dry sandy
ground
and two areas of wet
sand
.
This
is
then
followed by the second diagram in which it can be seen that as
particles
of
sand
continue to be carried by the
wind
along the
ground
, some
particles
start to adhere to the first and the second wet
ground
in separate piles. The
sand
particles
which have been transported by the
wind
, as illustrated in the final diagram, eventually gather en masse over the area of wet
sand
, piling one on top of the other until they form a
sand
dune. The accumulation of so many
sand
particles
is so large that the dunes, once formed, can deflect the
wind
, forcing it up one side of the dune and down the other. As
this
happens,
particles
of
sand
start gathering and piling up in the next area of wet
ground
.
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