56.Some people say that advertising has positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because it will make people feel dissatisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some say that publicity causes positive economic effects,
while
others would argue that announcements are bad for society since they will make people
feel unsatisfied with what they are and what they have. This
essay will argue that although
advertising captures consumers’ minds, a company’s economy will increase.
On the one hand, all publicity will exaggerate how is the product
and try to tell the consumers that their product
is the best, and they should have it. This
is a way of getting more clients, but sometimes the advertising uses incorrect words and expression to persuade people
to buy their products
, which harms individuals' heart, and make them doubt themselves if they are really what the announcement says. For instance
, there are many announcements that say that the ones who are watching the advertising are nothing, they need to consume the company’s product
to make the individual happier and have a higher social status. However
, I believe that this
is easy to solve since most people
know what the companies are trying to do, and they are very self-confident, so are not affected by what others say.
On the other hand
, companies will invest in advertisements so they can reach more people
. This
is because almost everyone will use their mobile phone to watch social media, and if companies insert publicity in these pages, more people
are able to know the company and the products
they sell. Even though maybe at the time they do not need to buy products
, people
will remember the announcement and can search for it in the future. Also
, now all social media have a technology that knows what the user likes and what you need, so they will recommend related products
. This
will cause an increase in the company’s economy. For instance
, people
using Instagram can watch several advertisements when watching the histories and photos uploaded by their friends, also
the application has a dedicated tab for sales. I believe that advertising products
allow more individuals to know about products
that some brands sell.
In conclusion, although
some announcements use the wrong way to persuade people
to buy their product
, the Internet and technology that there are now will directly recommend the individuals what they want, increasing the number of sales, and this
is why I think that advertising will better the economy.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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