Space travel has been possible for some time and some people claim that space tourism could be developed in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Recently

space

tourism

has been gaining

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more and more popularity. I believe that the development of it in the future may result in both positive and negative effects, which will be elaborated in

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essay. On the one hand,

space

tourism

can bring positive impacts on both the economy, education and science.

To begin

with, the development

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space

tourism

can provide new employment opportunities and investment opportunities for both businesses and employees. A higher number of

space

trips can be synonymous with the higher income brought

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space

-based services that cater to

space

tourists.

In addition

,

space

tourism

can

also

provide a boost for research and education. Through

space

travel, tourists can gain deeper insight into outer

space

, broadening their horizons through activities that can never be found in boring and seemingly impractical science classes at school.

In addition

, to improve the quality of

space

travel, substantial research needs to be done

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therefore

encouraging more people to get involved in scientific research.

However

, the development

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space

tourism

can inevitably result in some adverse impacts on the environment and the gap between the rich and the poor. Spacecraft launch is usually believed to lower the quality of air

as well as

contribute to worsening the issue of global warming.

In addition

, exhaust from

spacecrafts’

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engines can be responsible for long-term impact on the ozone layer. Another negative effect is widening the gap between the rich and the poor.

Space

tourism

is usually exorbitant and not accessible to a large number of people in the world.

This

is the type of entertainment that may be enjoyed by only wealthy or

super wealthy

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people;

that is

why

this

activity can create negative attitudes from the public

as well as

highlight the already significant gap between the privileged and the poor. In conclusion,

although

space

tourism

can be beneficial in terms of boosting the economy and education, it is my belief that

this

can

also

result in negatives.