Space travel has been possible for some time and some people claim that space tourism could be developed in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Recently
space
tourism
has been gaining in
more and more popularity. I believe that the development of it in the future may result in both positive and negative effects, which will be elaborated in Change preposition
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this
essay.
On the one hand, space
tourism
can bring positive impacts on both the economy, education and science. To begin
with, the development in
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of
space
tourism
can provide new employment opportunities and investment opportunities for both businesses and employees. A higher number of space
trips can be synonymous with the higher income brought to
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by
space
-based services that cater to space
tourists. In addition
, space
tourism
can also
provide a boost for research and education. Through space
travel, tourists can gain deeper insight into outer space
, broadening their horizons through activities that can never be found in boring and seemingly impractical science classes at school. In addition
, to improve the quality of space
travel, substantial research needs to be done and
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therefore
encouraging more people to get involved in scientific research.
However
, the development in
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of
space
tourism
can inevitably result in some adverse impacts on the environment and the gap between the rich and the poor. Spacecraft launch is usually believed to lower the quality of air as well as
contribute to worsening the issue of global warming. In addition
, exhaust from spacecrafts’
engines can be responsible for long-term impact on the ozone layer. Another negative effect is widening the gap between the rich and the poor. Change noun form
spacecrafts
Space
tourism
is usually exorbitant and not accessible to a large number of people in the world. This
is the type of entertainment that may be enjoyed by only wealthy or super wealthy
people; Add a hyphen
super-wealthy
that is
why this
activity can create negative attitudes from the public as well as
highlight the already significant gap between the privileged and the poor.
In conclusion, although
space
tourism
can be beneficial in terms of boosting the economy and education, it is my belief that this
can also
result in negatives.Submitted by Nhu Pham on
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