The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
The line graph demonstrates the average figure for UK passengers travelling daily by
car
bus
or train
from 1970 to 2030
Overall
, it is clear that
car
was the most popular way among Correct article usage
the car
people
in UK
throughout the period shown. Correct article usage
the UK
Also
, while
the number of commuters who use train
Correct article usage
the train
is
the main vehicle Correct your spelling
as
tend
to Correct subject-verb agreement
tends
rose
continually, Wrong verb form
rise
this
figure in bus
was a gradual reduction.
At the Correct article usage
the bus
beggining
, Correct your spelling
beginning
car
had the highest number at about 5 Add an article
the car
million
passengers, while
the bus
and train
was
Change the verb form
were
little
bit lower at approximately 4 Add an article
a little
million
and 2 million
respectively. In 2000, there was not much change in the position of 3 ways. The car
leading the trend with 7 million
people
was used, after that, there was small
drop Correct article usage
a small
by
0.5 Change preposition
of
million
in the figure of railway commuter
. Fix the agreement mistake
commuters
Lastly
, there was a slight growth to 3 million
in the bus
through 30 years.
By 2030, the number of people
who commute by car
is expected reach
the highest point at 9 Fix the infinitive
to reach
million
. Train
continute
with significant increase and pass over Correct your spelling
continue
bus
at 4.5 Add an article
the bus
million
. In the future, people
tend to use private transport more than public transport like bus
so it drop to 3 Fix the agreement mistake
buses
million
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, bus, train, people, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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