The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
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The pie charts represent information about the
population
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of Yemen and Italy in three
age
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groups in 2000 and projections for 2050. In general, Yemen had a large
population
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of young
age
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in 2000 and the same is predicted for the year 2050,
while
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the
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of Italy is filled with adults. In 2000 Yemen’s
population
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had well below half of people under 14 years old making the
age
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groups the largest in the country.
In contrast
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, in the same year, there were 14.3% of kids in the same
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category
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which is the lowest number who live in Italy. There were only 3.6%
population
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of over 60,
whereas
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in Italy there were nearly a quarter of individuals.
Furthermore
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, the largest
population
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in Italy were in the 15-59
age
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category
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with just beyond 60%,
whereas
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in the same
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Yemen had roughly half of the
population
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.
Nevertheless
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, Yemen’s youngest group is dipping by approximately 13% and the average proportion of 60s people is expected to increase by just 2%. The largest community is a middle-aged
category
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which will jump slightly to well beyond half of the
population
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.
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, in 2050, the number of people over 60 will climb to just beyond two-fifths.
Conversely
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, the two other categories will diminish minimally to 11.5% in young
age
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and 46.2% in middle
age
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, age, category with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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