The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporing the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are two line graphs comprised of
one
Use synonyms
graph
that illustrates changes in electrical appliances for an owner and the second Use synonyms
graph
shows the number of housework Use synonyms
hours
weekly in Use synonyms
one
country from 1920 to 2019. In the first Use synonyms
graph
, there are three items as Use synonyms
households
using electrical appliances which are washing machine, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner given with percentage of Use synonyms
households
. In the second Use synonyms
graph
, Use synonyms
hours
of housework per week were given with Use synonyms
years
with twenty Use synonyms
years
of gaps. Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
while
the percentage of Linking Words
households
that use electrical appliances dramatically increased in the initial chart, the number of Use synonyms
hours
of housework gradually decreased over the period of 100 Use synonyms
years
in the second Use synonyms
one
.
On the Use synonyms
one
hand, in 1920, the percentage of washing machines was a little higher than vacuum cleaners, meanwhile, there were a negligible amount of refrigerators. In the following Use synonyms
years
, both of the Use synonyms
households
moderately increased but percentages of refrigerators surged in 1940, peaked in 1960, and slightly increased in 1980, after that, it remained constant. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, amount of washing machines fluctuated and slightly increased over the period, and vacuum cleaners continued to soar until 2019, reaching a peak in 2000.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
while
the average number of Linking Words
hours
for Use synonyms
households
began at 50, it gradually reduced until 1960 to 20 Use synonyms
hours
per week. Use synonyms
Then
, it Linking Words
plateauaed
for nearly 60 Correct your spelling
plateaued
years
without minor fluctuations.Use synonyms
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