The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporing the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#show #changes #ownership #appliances #amount #time #housework #households #country #summarise #information #features #comparisons
There are two line graphs comprised of
one
graph
that illustrates changes in electrical appliances for an owner and the second graph
shows the number of housework hours
weekly in one
country from 1920 to 2019. In the first graph
, there are three items as households
using electrical appliances which are washing machine, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner given with percentage of households
. In the second graph
, hours
of housework per week were given with years
with twenty years
of gaps. Overall
, while
the percentage of households
that use electrical appliances dramatically increased in the initial chart, the number of hours
of housework gradually decreased over the period of 100 years
in the second one
.
On the one
hand, in 1920, the percentage of washing machines was a little higher than vacuum cleaners, meanwhile, there were a negligible amount of refrigerators. In the following years
, both of the households
moderately increased but percentages of refrigerators surged in 1940, peaked in 1960, and slightly increased in 1980, after that, it remained constant. On the contrary
, amount of washing machines fluctuated and slightly increased over the period, and vacuum cleaners continued to soar until 2019, reaching a peak in 2000.
On the other hand
, while
the average number of hours
for households
began at 50, it gradually reduced until 1960 to 20 hours
per week. Then
, it plateauaed
for nearly 60 Correct your spelling
plateaued
years
without minor fluctuations.Submitted by airbender on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words one, graph, hours, households, years with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 5 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!