The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporing the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporing the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are two line graphs comprised of
one
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graph
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that illustrates changes in electrical appliances for an owner and the second
graph
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shows the number of housework
hours
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weekly in
one
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country from 1920 to 2019. In the first
graph
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, there are three items as
households
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using electrical appliances which are washing machine, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner given with percentage of
households
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. In the second
graph
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,
hours
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of housework per week were given with
years
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with twenty
years
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of gaps.
Overall
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,
while
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the percentage of
households
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that use electrical appliances dramatically increased in the initial chart, the number of
hours
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of housework gradually decreased over the period of 100
years
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in the second
one
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. On the
one
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hand, in 1920, the percentage of washing machines was a little higher than vacuum cleaners, meanwhile, there were a negligible amount of refrigerators. In the following
years
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, both of the
households
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moderately increased but percentages of refrigerators surged in 1940, peaked in 1960, and slightly increased in 1980, after that, it remained constant.
On the contrary
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, amount of washing machines fluctuated and slightly increased over the period, and vacuum cleaners continued to soar until 2019, reaching a peak in 2000.
On the other hand
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,
while
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the average number of
hours
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for
households
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began at 50, it gradually reduced until 1960 to 20
hours
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per week.
Then
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, it
plateauaed
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plateaued
for nearly 60
years
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without minor fluctuations.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words one, graph, hours, households, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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