The bar charts illustrate the average years of schooling, scientists and technicians per 1000 people and also the participation levels in research and development in developing and industrialised countries during 1980 and 1990.
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The diagrams show the average annual of schooling, scientists and technicians per thousand humans and
also
the participation levels in research and development in developing and industrialised countries
between 1980 and 1990.
Overall
it is undoubtfull
that industrialised Correct your spelling
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undoubtfully
countries
have huge numbers to campare
with developing Correct your spelling
compare
countries
in all activity
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year
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In 1980 very noticeable that Fix the agreement mistake
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countries
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in 1990. However
, scientists and technicians and spending on research and development in 1980 hasn't
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have such
industralised
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industrialised
countries
sharply increased, meanwhile developing countries
have a minor increase or even decrease leads situation to undesireable
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undesirable
countries
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