The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables show information about
sales
of fairtrade labelled Coffee and Bananas in millions of euros in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. It is important to note that in 1999
Switzerland
had the highest
sales
of either coffee or bananas in comparison with others. In the coffee table,
Switzerland
had 3M
sales
which is half of its
sales
in 2004 but it was two times of
UK
sales
in 1999.
hence
, the
UK
had 20M
sales
in 2004 which was the highest among them.
On the other hand
, Sweden had the lowest amount in both years which were respectively 0.8 and 1. Denmark and
Belgium
were in third and fourth rank after the
UK
and
Switzerland
in both years. In the bananas table,
Switzerland
had the highest amount of
sales
in both years and more other countries as well which were 15M in 1999 and 47M in 2004.
Moreover
, the
UK
had 1M
sales
in 1999 which was less than Denmark which was double it but had more than
Belgium
which was 0.6M in the same year.
Hence
, in 2004 the
UK
had 5.5M
sales
which was more than
Belgium
, Sweden and Denmark and
Belgium
had more
sales
which was 4.
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  • Fairtrade labelled
  • significant increase/decrease
  • consumer awareness
  • sustainable growth
  • ethical consumerism
  • market trends
  • dominant market
  • comparative analysis
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