The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
The bar chart illustrates the different types of
transports
used to travel in a European City from 1960 to 2000. It is evident from the chart that, car transport was gradually increasing throughout the period, Fix the agreement mistake
transport
while
the
other Correct article usage
apply
transports
were declined.
To begin
, car traveler
stood at just 5 per cent in 1960, which was 5 times less than for the bike Change the spelling
traveller
traveler
, and Change the spelling
traveller
this
was far less than on foot. Apart from a jump to approximately 35% of total travelers
in 2000.
The next two Change the spelling
travellers
transports
popularity Change noun form
transports'
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
the
similar trend, both were gradually decreasing over the time frame. In 1980, bike and foot Correct article usage
a
travelers
were 20% and Change the spelling
travellers
at
about 18% respectively. Change preposition
apply
At the end
of the period, both transports
were in
between 5 to 8% in 2000.
Bus popularity spiked to 25 per cent in 1980. Change preposition
apply
Then
its popularity decreased the following year, and the bus
Correct quantifier usage
number of bus
traveler
was 15 per cent.Change the spelling
traveller
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