Your sister has asked you to organize the music for her wedding at the end of next month. Write a letter to your friend who is an amateur musician. In your letter ● ask your friend to perform at the wedding ● describe why he/she would be suitable for this event ● explain how your friend will be compensated if they agree.
Dear Thomas,
I am giving you an invitation
on
my sibling's event to perform at my house.
When my Change preposition
to
sister
marriage Change noun form
sister's
has
been fixed Wrong verb form
had
about
one week I decided to give a surprise party. Change preposition
for about
However
, I was bewildered to hire
a special singer but suddenly your name Change preposition
about hiring
come
to my mind. Wrong verb form
came
Besides
this
, many performances you had done in our college and win prizes.
Although
, you have a platform to performed
on the television shows and I enjoy your voice quality whenever I Change the form of the verb
perform
listen
your songs. The quality of your voice is Add the preposition
listen to
as
versatile singer and you have Correct your spelling
a
also
experienced on
different events. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, many of my family members are liked
your soothing voice. I think you would do best performance on my sister's marriage if you Wrong verb form
like
come
Wrong verb form
came
on
the function I will be grateful Change preposition
to
to
your presence.
Change preposition
for
Therefore
, I can arrange your pick and drop facilities. Moreover
, an accommodation facility will also
arrange
in the PC Hotel and three times Wrong verb form
be arranged
meal
Fix the agreement mistake
meals
also
include
.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Warm wishes,Wrong verb form
be included
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
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